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long time reader
should be “not exposed to it 100% of the time”
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In the last panel of page 382 I think that “chicken’s food” should be “chicken food”.
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in the last panel, if she stays away from him he cant smell her so he will just chase them, i think you meant something like she should keep exposing the smell to him or something like that
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“I cannot believe it” would sound much more natural as “I can’t believe it”.
Been reading this all evening, sorry I didn’t notice you could use proofreading help until a couple minutes ago.
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Gillsing Reply:
June 1st, 2012 at 9:30 am
No, the monster chicken would need to stay away from Milla so that it doesn’t get used to the smell, and will therefore be affected by it whenever it does get close. If the monster chicken gets used to the smell it might very well eat them all.
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