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Hahaha these pages are awesome! Where it says “Take this as an official broke up” it should be “break up”. Just thought you should know! :D

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Raul Trevino Reply:

GREAT! I got it, thanks!!

Hey! Really nice BLOOOOG!!!! :D

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So, what’s going to happen next? This is such an interesting story to follow!

Spelling gaffes:

Panel 5 – “The truth /is/ you’ve got to spit it out”

Panel 6 – I’m not sure what you’re trying to say here, but I’m thinking it might want to be “So you think you have the stomach?”

But, there’s really no telling what it would take to knock King Queer down, and I’m wondering what was behind the alien’s helmet as well…

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Raul Trevino Reply:

Hey JKelley, thank you so much!

About Panel 5, I wanted to refer to Shin’s comment about that he doesn’t have genitals, so Milla is now saying that. I don’t know if it make sense at all … What do you think?
Thanks!

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JKelley Reply:

Ah – so perhaps “You have a stomach!” is what you were aiming for?

But, I’ve long since quit guessing what you’re going to do next (since I was most often wrong, and I don’t like being wrong…) and I’m just going to sit back and enjoy the ride. Deal?

JDK

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Raul Trevino Reply:

Got it! I fixed it, you can refresh to see the new version.

And yes, enjoy the ride! :D

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“Take this as an official brake up”

“brake” should be “break”. Both words are pronounced the same way but “brake” is what you do (and use) to stop your car.

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Raul Trevino Reply:

Great! I fixed it! Thank you so much, you can click on refresh.

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