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Chapi: The menace? The Mission?…Does shin going to be fine?
DOES GOING TO BE FINE?
How about, Is he going to be fine?
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“We need Shin IN battle”, “on battle” doesn’t make sense.
And “we don’t have time to heal HIM” in the very next sentence.
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Raul Trevino Reply:
May 31st, 2011 at 9:18 am
Done! Thank you so much 5cacti. In fact, it was the ONLY dialogue that I skipped from my editor … (I’m a bad boy). Click refresh and you’ll see the new version.
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andho Reply:
May 31st, 2011 at 9:57 pm
Maybe that’s his grammar
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Raul Trevino Reply:
June 7th, 2011 at 12:01 pm
That could be a reasonable justification … anyway, their world is fucked up!
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